skylines for life

This is my basic facts test my time was 2.56 and my score was 99/100  I got my best time.

BLACK HAT next time I would like to get 100/100 and get it done in to minutes

yellow hat I got my best time witch was 2.56

This is my writing we had to rite to sexy paragraphs. sexy paragraph make us rite more descriptive.

Black hat I think i could off made it more descriptive.

Yellow hat I think i done my writing well because it was my first time writing sexy paragraphs i did it good.

Informal and formal writingThis is my formal and informal writing. we had to write a informal and formal paragraph. I chose to do mine on goin to statford. YELLOW  HAT the thing that i did well was my feeling because i put wot i was feeling.

BLACK  HAT  Te thing that that i could of did better was my five sencers because they make your story better and make the read wont to read more

Having a party

this is my writing that describes having a party and having a good feed

BLACK HAT The thing that I could of improve on would be my five senses because it makes your have feeling and it makes the reader wont to read more.

YELLOW HAT  The thing that I did well was my planning because i added descriptif words and i did my first paragraph good

This is my witing we went out side to see who could hand on the bars we had to dicribe how it felt and what we were feeling.

y I think that i dicibed it good

black hat I think that i could off added more 

Hi we had to do three peaces of writing and this is one.

Hi this is my reading hope you like it.

Hi this is my work of week we did a rugby wold cup poem hope you like it.

Hi this is my kia kaha writing

Hi this is my reading contract hope you like it